For this draft you were supposed to rewrite it as a regular essay-questions go away and you have an introduction with a thesis at the end, body paragraphs and conclusion. I have updated the instructions on Canvas. Please check.
this would make a good thesis statement:
. The declaration of independence is the best document in American history that today people forget about like it does not matter…or does it? Fact is the document is still crucial today as it contains the ideas of a government our freedom fighters had for our nation and their complaints against the British government
Then you will need body paragraphs that include quotes to explain your thesis more.